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Trit
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3/18/2008 1:54:54 AM

Level: 1
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Total Posts: 7
Trit

(sorry I decided to scrap the original plan for Trit and go for something different)

Name: Trit Inoarne Bure

Race: Keifan

Age: 120

Gender: M

Description: This man has droopy eyes that are the color of valuable emeralds. He has long, curly, silver hair which lies on his shoulders fetchingly. His physical form is noteably athletic. He has a calm air about him. He has a ritualistic marking on his neck
(http://www.megacoolstuff.com/3dbiohazard/Biohazard200.jpg )

Home World: Sunset Colony

HistorySadsorry for typos I'm typing in the dark)
  Trit was born in the Sunset Colony his Father was a drunk, not a bad drunk just a drunk. His mother was a schizo luckily she had medicine to cure the mood swings. Between an incoherent drunk as a father and a hallucinating schizo it was a wonder Trit even lived. John a sixty-three year old "halfie" (human and keifan) had assumed the role of a big brother for him and taught him the ropes of Sunset, Daireem, Keifan and Human society, magic, life, and pretty much everything Trit wanted to know.

  Eventually Trit became old enough to leave Sunset with John, of course. Trit had wanted to see Fierra Mesa ever since he heard about it. John gladly took him there and showed him around and eventually convinced the local Keifans to adorn Trit with a ritualistic mark.

  Around sixty Trit had traveled many systems and John had begun to grow old and withered. John eventually retired from adventuring and settled down on Perrenor saying that "I wouldn't want to go to soft on ya in case you need me in the future". Before John left he passed down his family's ritual sword
(http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g174/anime_tomboy_4eva/Sword-awesomest.jpg ). Trit had settled down and got a job working as a gun salesman.

  Currently he has quit his job and left for Fierra Mesa to explore The Deeps.



Items:
Bushmaster Carbon 15 Type 97S
Microtech HALO III
Orion Holocommunicator X2
Ritualistic Blade
Box of Matches X3
Camera

Vehicle: CP3 Vexxer

Trit's CP3 Vexxer dubbed "Rust Bucket" has seen better days. The outside of it is battle worn and scratched far from beautiful it has several areas where Trit and John had tried to install weapons and failed miserably only suceeding in installing a pneumatic 50. cal Rifle. On the inside it has the additional kitchen attachment and a seperate are that works as a makeshift brig. It has a single tv and one game system with only three games two of which don't work. There is a bunk bed that seems to have been cut in half to remove the top part of the bunk and then duct taped several times over. A simple desk bolted into the wall
and the drawer is padlocked with three locks one of which had almost been sawn through. The cockpit area is actually quite nice complete with a co-pilot seat.
Aside from standard feature it has a hidden stash of sweets and the most important thing of all, a super-sized adjustible cup holder.

Spells:

Basic Magic: From a candle flame to a opening a locked door Basic Magic has it all!

Twitch (In'akt): Causes the target to convulse wildly some can overcome it with pure willpower or conditioning. The larger the target the more energy and concentration required

Deafen (Kin): Causes the target to lose hearing for about two and a half minutes, no permanent effects found and once the caster leaves a 2-mile radius the spell dissipates.

Extra Shot: When cast on a gun that requires bullets it permanently retains this ability. When the last shot is fired another bullet magically appears in the gun. (2 min cooldown between each use)

Regeneration (E'nok'thull): The caster channels energy into a wound to restore the damaged tissue the spells lasts as long as the caster touches the wound, therefore it is not very combat effective and not able to heal internal wounds.

Splinter (Ch't): Causes a wooden object (approx 3 ft diameter sphere) to shatter into sharpened splinters and dart at the target, it is aimed by the caster's finger

Element weapon (ino'rt): Enchants a simple object with elemental properties.

Far Sight (Tiem lor Vici) - Enchanting an object with Far Sight allows the caster to see from the object's point of view remotely. As the caster's abilities advance, the effective distance will increase.

Jam (Kr'ick): cause a firearm to jam instantaneously the caster much touch the firearm Jam has a two minute cooldown.

Call of Death (Eerik toll Vintil): A spell created by Trit himself Trit's marking on his neck seems to darken and wrap around the victim showing him horror beyond belief and pain few have experienced. This is only an illusion and while using it Trit must stay stationary. Trit experiences the illusion as well but on a much milder scale and has control over it to personally match it to the victims beliefs and experiences. Even if Trit knows nothing of the victim the spell feels into the victims mind and finds the most painfull experience for the person and recreates the same feeling this is optional. After the spell is over the victim snaps back to reality with one last side effect light to severe temporary psychosis and in the worst cases permanent psychosis. While using the spell Trit remains oblivious to what is going on around him and is defenseless
Stasis
Hey Claudius...
You killed my father.
Big mistake.

Dominion Master
3/18/2008 8:05:45 PM

Level: 25
Experience: 65000

Total Posts: 691
RE: Trit

I'm going to have to ask you to change your history a bit.

The first and biggest problem is that the Iron Guard is an invite-only type deal. The people handling invitations would never even consider someone under 18, citing that anyone that young would not have sufficient experience.

Graduating a ten-year military academy in two is pretty ridiculous, but I'm willing to overlook that. However, how can he be that good and get captured by what you describe simply as a criminal? Especially if he is/was Iron Guard, the best of the best, personally approved and trusted by Master General Suerton.

Please revise your history.
Trit
New User
4/22/2008 12:23:58 AM

Level: 1
Experience: 0

Total Posts: 7
RE: Trit

I edited it and entirely scrapped the original idea.
Stasis
Hey Claudius...
You killed my father.
Big mistake.

Dominion Master
4/23/2008 1:01:22 AM

Level: 25
Experience: 65000

Total Posts: 691
RE: Trit

That's much better. Smile

Approved.
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