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nilef1035
4/15/2008 4:51:59 PM
Total Posts: 4
Nile Frater

Character Name: Nile Frater

Age:24

Gender:Male

Species: Human
Description: Nile is 5foot8. He has medium lengh blonde hair, to around his shoulders. He is very out-going, and from what he has been through, dosen't fear much. he generally wears combat jeans, and a black anorak, with a white tank top underneath. He is muscular, but is quite agile. He understands computers very well.

History: Ever since he was a child, he has lived aboard a space-shuttle.His parents left upon it, a note, hoping that when he learn to read he'd find out about them. They left computer programs that activated at certain times, when he had aged. Using these he learned how to read and write. He was a brilliant pilot by the age of 13, and spends all his time when on-board the ship, mucking about on the computers. When he ands on planets, he practises the art of Parkour. he is trying to find his dad, following what the note said.

Ship/Vehicle:CP3-Vexxar

Items:
Emerson Combat Karambit Folder
Bushmaster XM15 E2S 16 inch
Corman-Falee Double-Bladed
Mag Instruments 2 D-Cell Maglite X2
Stasis
Hey Claudius...
You killed my father.
Big mistake.

Dominion Master
4/15/2008 5:06:06 PM

Level: 25
Experience: 65000

Total Posts: 691
RE: Nile Frater

EDIT: Approved!

Hi! Welcome to Daireem. Smile

Everything you've written is fine. However, you excluded a list of items. I just need to know if you don't want to start with anything or if you just forgot it. Smile

Also, might I suggest adding more to his history? (You mention "from what he has been through, doesn't fear much" in his description, but didn't elaborate on it in his history.) It's not necessary, just a suggestion.

As soon as I know what you want to do about items, I'll approve it. Welcome! Grin

Might I ask how you found us?
nilef1035
4/15/2008 5:13:31 PM
Total Posts: 4
RE: Nile Frater

Ok I'll add it in a minute.

I found you in a library. There was a note lying next to the public computer with the address on it
Stasis
Hey Claudius...
You killed my father.
Big mistake.

Dominion Master
4/15/2008 5:16:57 PM

Level: 25
Experience: 65000

Total Posts: 691
RE: Nile Frater

Wow. That's pretty cool, haha.

I wonder who left it there.
nilef1035
4/15/2008 5:24:09 PM
Total Posts: 4
RE: Nile Frater

Hopefully I'll find out

Heres my Item list:

Emerson Combat Karambit Folder
Bushmaster XM15 E2S 16 inch
Corman-Falee Double-Bladed
Mag Instruments 2 D-Cell Maglite X2
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