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cytech380
5/24/2008 11:33:49 AM
Total Posts: 3
Cytech Xso

Character Name:Cytech Xso
Age:24

Gender:Male

Species:Human
Description:Tall 6'2 slightly muscular
will wear anything comfortable Caucasian

History: Born on Darieem he just worked oddjobs
until finally he decided to go on a Adventure

Item(s):
4 feet of rope


Ship/Vehicle:None
Stasis
Hey Claudius...
You killed my father.
Big mistake.

Dominion Master
5/24/2008 1:33:29 PM

Level: 25
Experience: 65000

Total Posts: 691
RE: Cytech Xso

Disapproved.

A big reason for requiring profiles is to show us how capable a writer you are. You haven't made a good impression.

You've shown me a few things with this profile.

One, your character's description is that of about a third of the galaxy. This tells me you made no attempt at creativity.

Two, you didn't do any reading before joining, as Daireem is the name of the galaxy in which this RPG takes place. Everybody (with a few rare exceptions) was born in Daireem. It's which planet that matters.

Three, you made no effort to properly form and punctuate sentences. It is very difficult to read your posts like this. (It is, in fact, a rule to write proper, or at least close to proper English.)

Furthermore, you made an in-character post without your character approved. This is also a rule breakage.
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