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insaneidiot 8/29/2008 12:38:40 PM Total Posts: 1	Corronn Zein well.... My character is named Corronn Zein, a 200 year old male Demon Shapeshifter(alt. form: Dragon-like Lizard). Corronn is.... well, huge. He has massive claws instead of where a human's fingernails would be, the claws almost weapons in themselves. Massive wings give him something just short of flight. He is a Red Demon, Nearly 7 feet tall. He is very short-tempered, always ready for a fight. He usually wears very solid steel armor, but sometimes wears leather instead. The Dragon is 12 1/2 feet tall, a typical White Dragon. He was born a fighter, in the most violent part of his homeworld. Every day, he fought off other creatures while trying to gather food. Life was hard, so he took his knife and his gun, and prepared to leave his home...forever. Claw Skills: Violent Slash: High damage, but predictable. No extra effect. Mutilate: Rushing MultiSlash attack mauls 1 opponent, leaving him stunned or dead. Predictable, but strong. Elemental abilities: Wing Burst: Wind element Ranged attack. Moderate damage, Somewhat predictable. Good against rock and stone based creatures. Flame Breathdemon only) Shoots a powerful burst of flame that hits enemies in front of Corronn. Moderate damage, VERY EASY TO AVOID! enemies hit will be set on fire, further weakening them. Tornado: (dragon form only) Creates a massive tornado that is hard to avoid, but very obvious. Strong attack, Only truly powerful creatures can take a hit and survive. useable 1 time each day, and limits flight or Gliding. Burning Destruction: (demon form only) Much larger fire burst. Hits more enemies, almost always fatal. 1 use per day and Corronn's fire based attacks will be blocked for a while. Ice Blast: (dragon only)  Shoots a powerful burst of ice that hits enemies in front of Corronn. Moderate damage, somewhat easy to avoid. Enemies hit freeze. Frozen Obliviondragon only) Very cold blast of ice breath. High damage, easy to predict, easy to avoid. Enemies hit freeze to death. 1 use per day. prevents ice attacks for a short time. Sword/Knife skills: Burning Slash: Fire based slash. Freezing Slash: Ice based slash. Stone Slash: Rock based slash. Wind Slash: Wind based slash. Ranged skills: Snipe: (passive) accuracy is enhanced. if Corronn would just barely miss, he might hit instead. Open Fire: A quick fire barrage. Good damage. Veteran: (passive) Guns do more damage. Gun Expert: (passive) Reloads are quicker. items: Corman-Falee Beam Saber(400$) Fisher Systems SC-20k Thermal/Starlight Goggles(2k$) AK47(350$) Springfield Armory XML(75$) Rock Knife (0$) (I'm making my own ship, tell me if this doesn't qualify as light or if its too powerful) Ship Model: XX7A-Dragon Manufactuer: Dragon Industries Incorporated(DII) Type: Fighter Field: Space, Atmosphere HyperDrive: DII Basic HyperDrive Life Support: yes Artaficial Gravity: yes Weight Class: Light Weapons: 2 Light Ion Racks, 1 Medium Ion Rack
Stasis Hey Claudius... You killed my father. Big mistake. Dominion Master 8/30/2008 8:44:16 PM Level: 25 Experience: 65000 Total Posts: 691	RE: Corronn Zein Welcome to Daireem! Before I approve your character, he needs a history. Where he was born, why he had such a violent life, why he's so proficient with firearms. A two hundred year old demon has to have more to say than "I fought for a while and then I didn't." Also, please describe his dragon form. And... I'm going to nitpick some of your skills too. Things like Wing Burst being good against rock and stone based creatures. Why is that? Or your passive skill "Veteran." What is this doing that can cause a bullet to do more damage? And I just take beef with this one on general principle: Open Fire: A quick fire barrage. Consumes more ammo than a normal attack. You're not limited to turns or points. You can dump the whole magazine whenever you want. I may be a little harsh right now, but by the time we get your profile sorted out, you should have no problem.

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