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QuantumTroll
Street Fighter/Space Station
10/10/2008 4:38:50 AM

Level: 1
Experience: 0

Total Posts: 181
re: fightin skies

Uh, so, it'd be awkward if Hugo just saved Valerie and her pilot and they just leave.  Need a plot hook, I guess, but I don't know what would hook Valerie.  

One thing I was thinking about was looting the remains of the bandit dirigible and Hugo's employer.  Then, there are a couple of bandits in Sally who recognize the ornithopter and we have a little fight.  That could be swung into my original plot idea of starting a fight club and growing it into a fighting tournament, with the bandit loot as starting capital.  How does that sound?

Also, I wrote a scene where the Werrington dirigible tries to defend itself and fails, but in then my laptop got stolen (!), so I'll have to wait with that until I get a new computer and I can get access to my back-up hard drive.
Stasis
Hey Claudius...
You killed my father.
Big mistake.

Dominion Master
10/10/2008 12:13:31 PM

Level: 25
Experience: 65000

Total Posts: 691
RE: re: fightin skies

I know it would be awkward, I just didn't know what to do. I figured something would stop Valerie, I just didn't figure out what yet. Laughing

We could go with your idea and loot the bandits' ship, I'm just not sure exactly how interesting writing about a fight club would be afterwards. We can always try it!

Ugh, sorry to hear about your laptop. Blah
Terrathel
assassin/mercenary
10/18/2008 1:00:49 AM

Level: 1
Experience: 0

Total Posts: 74
RE: re: fightin skies

hmm, I could dive in there, but I don't seriously know what I'd do, that might depend on the nature of what she's planning.....
QuantumTroll
Street Fighter/Space Station
10/23/2008 6:22:51 AM

Level: 1
Experience: 0

Total Posts: 181
RE: re: fightin skies

Hey, what happened to my last post?  Did you delete it because you edited yours?  I kinda liked the way it was going... all Valerie needed to say was "thanks for saving my life, i'm not going to try to turn you in" and Hugo would've calmed down. But this is fine, too, I just need to decide how Hugo is going to interpret that statement.

Also: welcome Terrathel!
Stasis
Hey Claudius...
You killed my father.
Big mistake.

Dominion Master
10/23/2008 8:50:54 AM

Level: 25
Experience: 65000

Total Posts: 691
RE: re: fightin skies

Huh? I didn't even see your post, much less delete it. Sad
QuantumTroll
Street Fighter/Space Station
10/23/2008 9:14:01 AM

Level: 1
Experience: 0

Total Posts: 181
RE: re: fightin skies

Yarr, I guess I messed up posting it or something.  Anyway, I've got a backstory about a bounty on Hugo's head.  It came out faster when Valerie just out and asked about it Blah
Stasis
Hey Claudius...
You killed my father.
Big mistake.

Dominion Master
10/23/2008 9:19:17 AM

Level: 25
Experience: 65000

Total Posts: 691
RE: re: fightin skies

Yeah, but a while after I posted that I realized she should know what the bounty is about if she took it. XD But still, I'm sure there's plenty more to it than the contract says.

Unfortunately, I have to go to work in a few minutes, so I don't have time to post. I'll try to later.
QuantumTroll
Street Fighter/Space Station
10/23/2008 9:32:00 AM

Level: 1
Experience: 0

Total Posts: 181
RE: re: fightin skies

Enjoy your day at work!  Here's a run-down of my missing post:

In Avesta Ruin (the end destination of the Werrington Express), a few months ago Hugo made a bad man named Rick Sonny very angry.  Something about catching him cheating at a gambling establishment, and Sonny was used to being allowed to cheat because he's got a lot of tough pals, you know?  So Hugo beat him and his buddies up (with Blank-fu) and stole a trinket.  That trinket funded the flyer plus some free time.  Hugo was chased out of town, but thinks the incident is long forgotten by this time.  Evidently Sonny keeps grudges.  

I would guess the contract would skip over most everything except "Rick Sonny of Avesta Ruin wants Hugo Blank for $$$ because nobody crosses Rick Sonny and lives."  Anything more would be too embarrassing to make public knowledge.  So that's why she maybe doesn't know so much about it, except how to find Hugo and that he's considered dangerous.  Whether he's wanted dead or alive is up to you.
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